tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35730665.post116291223940195821..comments2023-03-25T10:48:30.688+01:00Comments on Blogging English: e-tivity 3: Focus on languageSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15331531679145646654noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35730665.post-1163193838731422412006-11-10T22:23:00.000+01:002006-11-10T22:23:00.000+01:00Dear Sarah,My corrections are:since few weeks ago ...Dear Sarah,<BR/><BR/>My corrections are:<BR/><BR/>since few weeks ago I had no idea of blogging<BR/>until few weeks ago I had no idea of blogging<BR/><BR/>learning English in a completely disparate manner far from the strict academic one.<BR/><BR/>My dictionary says for disparate: 1.made up of parts or people that are very different from each other 2.(of two or more things) so different from each other that cannot be compared or cannot work together.<BR/><BR/>learning English in a completely different manner far from...<BR/><BR/>But avoiding "different" that I used in the previous phrase does<BR/><BR/>learning English in a completely distinct manner from the academic one<BR/><BR/>work?<BR/><BR/><BR/>one vs. you for the impersonal structure:<BR/><BR/>one can learn...<BR/><BR/>Thi use of one is very formal and now sounds old-fashioned. It is much more usual to use you for "people in general" and I when you're talking about yourself.<BR/>so "you can learn" is better<BR/><BR/>LaraLuiginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02930019790478826860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35730665.post-1163085554916471552006-11-09T16:19:00.000+01:002006-11-09T16:19:00.000+01:00Dear Sarah,these are my corrections:essential to d...Dear Sarah,<BR/>these are my corrections:<BR/>essential to distinguish one blog to <BR/>it is essential for a blog to be distinguished from another<BR/><BR/>the importantce of…? <BR/>the importance ofdeterminate <BR/><BR/>determinate<BR/>could determine (determinate is an adjective)<BR/><BR/>the interaction <BR/>Interaction <BR/><BR/>e.g. <BR/>For example<BR/><BR/>answer to <BR/>Answer someone<BR/><BR/>payed <BR/>Paid (I can’t believe I wrote it!)<BR/><BR/>enough? <BR/>You are quite self-critical<BR/><BR/>English <BR/>I didn’t understand the reason why this word is wrong.<BR/>I think the mistake is in the lack of the capital letter in the third question of the blog (Can this experience influence my english learning), but you wrote that the word is wrong. Furthermore, this term occurs many times in my blog, what sentence are you referring to?<BR/><BR/>New terms on the dictionary<BR/>New terms in the dictionary<BR/><BR/>A non academic language <BR/>Informal language<BR/><BR/>The everyday English <BR/>Everyday English<BR/><BR/>Was to organize <BR/>Were to (I’m feeling shame at this unforgivable error! Ok, I absolutely must re-read what I wrote)<BR/><BR/>FrancescaFedorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14599956647866214284noreply@blogger.com